Huh, never expected that I found a goldmine here, all are good, it suprise qualty even thou this is a demo and that it Sad that you might not continue this. But at the same time excited to what you be coocking up
I'm considering making an extended/revised demo. I couldn't get as much plot as I wanted into this demo and also got a few new ideas while working on it.
That was fun! Obviously intrigued by whatever a kardion is supposed to be given MC's lack of talents atm but I think there's certainly some cute dynamics going on between the three of them. Modern fantasy setting is also pretty cool, the line about cell phones being in movies but not something MC had access to before really has interesting set up for exploration of what tech is/isn't present! A fun read to stay up to date on, I hope you guys can continue!
This is a solid start! Honestly, the thing that makes me find this interesting the most is that is a modern fantasy setting that is still in its own fantasy world. I love that a lot, you so very rarely see people actually explore the concept of a fantasy world that isn't just standard high fantasy medieval era. I dig the various hints at what is and isn't common technology wise, like the main character not being familiar with using a phone really (the magic flipphone was an adorable detail) and even a powerful mage like the headmistress preferring cars for transport. I really am curious to see where this goes, because the potential for both worldbuilding and character development is realy high!
most had to do with when people would say the MC's name. One letter was switched in placement, I will have to read again for the others so I can screenshot them
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Huh, never expected that I found a goldmine here, all are good, it suprise qualty even thou this is a demo and that it Sad that you might not continue this. But at the same time excited to what you be coocking up
how tf have i never heard of this before?? such an absolute hidden gem
Really hoping this one gets expanded on. will be sharing it with anyone I possibly can
I'm considering making an extended/revised demo. I couldn't get as much plot as I wanted into this demo and also got a few new ideas while working on it.
Please do.
Enjoyed the demo. Your use of moving images for the magic is a much appreciated effort
That was fun! Obviously intrigued by whatever a kardion is supposed to be given MC's lack of talents atm but I think there's certainly some cute dynamics going on between the three of them. Modern fantasy setting is also pretty cool, the line about cell phones being in movies but not something MC had access to before really has interesting set up for exploration of what tech is/isn't present! A fun read to stay up to date on, I hope you guys can continue!
I LITERALLY PLAY HSR AND LOVE NAT TO BITS AND IT STILL TOOK ME WAY TOO LONG TO GET THE REFERENCE IM DYING 😭
This is awesome I can't wait to see where this goes
This is a solid start! Honestly, the thing that makes me find this interesting the most is that is a modern fantasy setting that is still in its own fantasy world. I love that a lot, you so very rarely see people actually explore the concept of a fantasy world that isn't just standard high fantasy medieval era. I dig the various hints at what is and isn't common technology wise, like the main character not being familiar with using a phone really (the magic flipphone was an adorable detail) and even a powerful mage like the headmistress preferring cars for transport. I really am curious to see where this goes, because the potential for both worldbuilding and character development is realy high!
Looking good, and hope to see more of this!
Nice to meet you, I'm Natasha an underworld doctor. Feeling Sick?
This commercial stalks me everywhere.
NO GET OUT OF MY HEAD-
i played the demo and i like the story and love Durrence
RAAAAGH WHAT IS WITH THE UNDERWORLD DOCTOR THING ☠
50% certain it's reference to a character from a gacha game lmao.
It's a smartphone mobile game that's F2P? That's a letdown. Guess I play my modded PS2 that I got Shadow Hearts on it! Time to grind for N.D.E music!
Everywhere i go, i hear that underworld doctor's voice!
This was a really good start. Though i did find lots of spelling errors, i know it was only build 1 too. I really hope to read more as it comes out.
What spelling errors did you find? We could quickly put out a typofix update if we missed a lot.
most had to do with when people would say the MC's name. One letter was switched in placement, I will have to read again for the others so I can screenshot them
I had someone else report that and it was fixed in the 0.1.1 minor update.
I was using the web browser one, so idk if that was updated or not. I will reread it again at some point in the next couple of days
It was updated to 0.1.1 too.